Absolutely Fantabulious work chong yeong! There is alot of good information laid out in neat order, completed all that must be done. A target for the future, is to make it more creative and interesting, is my thoughts strayed off a bit and i found it hard to keep focus, but all in all good work! ~Nour Makarem
Hi chong! Very good job so far and I hope that you will continue like this! ;) You have stated your problem, included a well informative investigation and included a very well written reflection and evaluation. I also think that all of the pictures that you have added are very nice and really makes it easy to understand all of your different thoughts and ideas. They are also very relevant to the project title. I feel that you could have improved on starting to reflect after each lesson or every week, whatever you feel is easier. Overall, great effort so far! - Oskar Ljungdell 9DD
COMPLETE PROJECT PEER ASSESSMENT: Very good job Chong! For the Investigation Criteria I have you 40/60 which corresponds to a 6/7. So, you have stated the problem and identified some potential sports gear and software that you could use. However, in order to envolve your mark you should try to incorporate different styles and features, as well as listed your sources.
Absolutely Fantabulious work chong yeong!
ReplyDeleteThere is alot of good information laid out in neat order, completed all that must be done.
A target for the future, is to make it more creative and interesting, is my thoughts strayed off a bit and i found it hard to keep focus, but all in all good work!
~Nour Makarem
Hi chong! Very good job so far and I hope that you will continue like this! ;)
ReplyDeleteYou have stated your problem, included a well informative investigation and included a very well written reflection and evaluation. I also think that all of the pictures that you have added are very nice and really makes it easy to understand all of your different thoughts and ideas. They are also very relevant to the project title.
I feel that you could have improved on starting to reflect after each lesson or every week, whatever you feel is easier.
Overall, great effort so far!
- Oskar Ljungdell 9DD
COMPLETE PROJECT PEER ASSESSMENT:
ReplyDeleteVery good job Chong! For the Investigation Criteria I have you 40/60 which corresponds to a 6/7. So, you have stated the problem and identified some potential sports gear and software that you could use. However, in order to envolve your mark you should try to incorporate different styles and features, as well as listed your sources.
Good Job
- Oskar Ljungdell 9DD